Ok so im startin to rap heres sumthin i wrote yesterday, tell me what you think of it and what Im doin wrong and how to improve
Here I come Fresh off the streets
Got some Nice Lyrics on some crazy ass beats
I’m new to the game but I don’t take defeats
Smoother than a Bentley with them alligator seats
Cuz I ride, I ride, I ride all day
Don’t get into the game Game unless you ready to play
Get out my way
I got money to make
Get out my way
If you phony and fake
If U dont get out my way then thats ur mistake
For goodness sake
can sumone stop me
With the rymes i spit i got the right to be cocky
Knock me down i get right back up like rocky
Nothin can stop me
Im hot like 300 degreez
My rymes are so sick you might catch the disease
And my flwo is ice Cold, dont be surprised if you freeze
Bitch Please
Try and match me I’m a beast
I eat these other rappers like a feast
Reppin the east
Till I die
I gotta stay High
Blowin bud wit different colors like a shirt wit tie die
I’m a fly guy