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Another poem of my style, “Photographs”. PLeAse read and comment.?

2 boys, fishing by the lake,
net billowing, a picture I was glad to take.
My baby on the swing, hair behind,
a way for her to fly, freedom on her mind.
My mom in the hospital, pale skin, blue eyes,
More tired day by day, but god knows she tries.
Standing by the gravestone, a straight line of black,
Stone in the foreground, family in the back.
A sun setting over the mountains, the sky so blue,
but its me behind the camera, so the halo’s around you.
An eagle soaring, peace in mid-flight,
a flag ripples in silence, blue, red, and white.
I meant the ’2′ to be spelled out.

stickleback fish care PLEASE ANY ADVICE what fish lives long???

for a school project we have made a mini ecosystem with potato plant at top, a spider (predator) then flies coming from below where there is the decomposition section of a rotting apple, grass, dirt, then sand and gravel, next is the aquarium with rocks. we want to add a stickleback fish instead of a guppie. do they live longer? if so how long? the water we added has been de chlorinefied w/ a substance and before that we “made it rain” by pouring water through the system. HOW CAN WE KEEP OUR FISH ALIVE THE LONGEST? any suggestions will help. thanks. if you dont know then what type of fish stays alive the longest???

PLEASE HELP. analyze thisss.?

For the last time, I don’t care if it’s not the right kind of poetry, whatever, I didn’t write it. All I want to know is what it means. I know I post these a lot, but I never get enough responses, so please help me out here!! and details!

Oh, Beautiful Parasite!

Here is a box, yes it is for you.
Filled with green grasses,
but sadly that’s not the truth.
Father, look deeper and your thoughts may explode,
in a time capsule the blindman had been shown.

Time after space, space before grace,
but no true mark or unit,
the forefront of an unrecognizable face.
Child, not alone to wonder will you find the roots,
the ones that keep buried the secrets in their shoots.

Falling into the sky, thinking this shouldn’t be goodbye,
riding on the underside of a silver star,
you’re right; it doesn’t bring the want to rise.
Mother, look! Your son! Can’t you see it’s me in disguise?
These weeds that clutter your mind?
These droplets making rain arise?
These ions changing the boulder that flies,
these diamonds coming from the ore that cries?
These pieces of porcelain falling from such great heights,
these inevitable circles formed from innumerable lines,
these curtains revealing such darkness that blinds,
these seeds of which breath leads air to bind,
these winds grinding the cage that abides,
these ashes fueling the fire that tries?
And yet through the blackened sky,
my blows to the window I repeatedly applied,
still weren’t enough to break the ties,
the kept your heart sealed within the case in which you died.
The guy I like wrote this, and idk if it’s about me. This got no ansers in poetry, so I’m trying it here. Real answers only please.

Name and Author of this poem PLEASE!!?

Her hair was up in a pony tail, her favorite dress tied with a bow.
Today was “Daddy’s Day” at school, and she couldn’t wait to go.

But her mommy tried to tell her, that she probably should stay home.
Why the kids might not understand, if she went to school alone.

But she was not afraid; she knew just what to say.
What to tell her classmates of why he wasn’t there today.

But still her mother worried, for her to face this day alone.
And that was why once again, she tried to keep her daughter home.

But the little girl went to school eager to tell them all.
Of a dad whose never there a dad who never calls.

There were daddies along the wall in back, for everyone to meet.
Children squirming impatiently, anxious in their seats.

One by one the teacher called a student from the class.
To introduce their daddy, as seconds slowly passed.

At last the teacher called her name, every child turned to stare.
Each of them was searching, for a man who wasn’t there.

“Where’s her daddy at?!” she heard a boy call out.
“She probably doesn’t have one,” another student dared to shout.

And from somewhere near the back, She heard another father say, “Looks like another deadbeat dad, too busy to waste his day.”

The words did not offend her, as she smiled up at her Mom.
And looked back at her teacher, who told her to go on.

And with hands behind her back, Slowly she began to speak
And out from the mouth of a child, came words incredibly unique.

“My Daddy couldn’t be here, because he lives so far away.
But I know he wishes he could be, Since this is such a special day

And though you cannot meet him, I wanted you to know.
All about my daddy and how much he loves me so.

He loved to tell me stories he taught me to ride my bike.
He surprised me with pink roses, and taught me to fly a kite.

We used to share fudge sundaes, and ice cream in a cone.
And though you cannot see him. I’m not standing here alone.

“Cause my daddy’s always with me, even though we are apart
I know because he told me, he’ll forever be in my heart”

With that, her little hand reached up, and lay across her chest. Feeling her own heartbeat, beneath her favorite dress.

And from somewhere in the crowd of dads, her mother stood in tears.
Proudly watching her daughter, who was wise beyond her years.

And when she dropped her hand back down, staring straight into the crowd.
She finished with a voice so soft, but its message clear and loud.

“I love my daddy very much, he’s my shining star.
And if he could, he’d be here, but heaven’s just too far.

You see he was a fireman and died just this past year.
When airplanes hit the towers and taught Americans to fear.

But sometimes when I close my eyes, it’s like he never went away.”
And then she closed her eyes, and saw him there that day.

And to her mother’s amazement, she witnessed with surprise.
A room full of daddies and children, all starting to close their eyes.

Who knows what they saw before them, Who knows what they felt inside.
Perhaps for merely a second, they saw him at her side.

“I know you’re with me Daddy,” to the silence she called out.
And what happened next made believers, of those once filled with doubt.

Not one in that room could explain it, for each of their eyes had been closed.. But there on the desk beside her, was a fragrant long-stemmed pink rose.

TODAY IS THE DAY. HELP PLEASE. Need to know if this idea is CORNY OR CREATIVE? Last minute opinion?

I’m Asian but the girl I really like is White. We are both 17 years old and friends, but I want to ask her out on date. Is this a creative idea to get her attention? She knows I’m not shy, but she always expect great ideas from me.

Idea: I have a remote controlled toy helicopter and I tied a rose and card on it, asking her to go out with me. And I’m going to fly it in her window or on her door then call her to open the door. She is very beautiful and I think this stunt is kind of corny. What do you think?