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How come only the crazy people are doing all the work here? We want something in return. Write us a Dorsimbra.
Like so…1 stanza English Sonnet, 1 stanza free form, 1 stanza non-rhyming iambic pentameter. Don’t make me go get Todd and Dondi…
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Time
Upon my watch, three hands tell me the time,
The mirror shows a different degree,
Forgotten thoughts with words that do not rhyme,
Meander down the road to lunacy.
Shine your shoes up!
Put on your tie!
Let’s go outside…
And find a place to fly!
Come and gone for me to see, believed,
The ocean tides, rivers wide, crimson sky,
How will I know when God has called to me?
Upon my watch, three hands tell me the time.
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Oh, yeah, it also must start and finish with the same line.
Do you realize how much of my work is directly because of you?
At least a dozen good poems about the instistoogtions of government and entertainment.
You missed many of them whilst trying to create new accounts.
If I ever say anything bad, it is never at you…maybe right next to you…
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Do you like this poem? The form is Dorsimbra…?
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Time
Upon my watch, three hands tell me the time,
The mirror shows a different degree,
Forgotten thoughts with words that do not rhyme,
Meander down the road to lunacy.
Shine your shoes up!
Put on your tie!
Let’s go outside…
And find a place to fly!
Come and gone for me to see, believed,
The ocean tides, rivers wide, crimson sky,
How will I know when God has called to me?
Upon my watch, three hands tell me the time.
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Marg…I stretch the rukes and the iambs as far as they go…I can speak in penta…with some artistry…
Yes…Destinations was another Dorsimbra
What should I do for my RAF interview and presentation?
I’ve got my presentation for my raf 6th form scholarship in a few days and was just wondering, do i need to go in a shirt and tie?
also, in roughly how much detail do i need to revise for the interview. Do i need to know the specs of every plane to fly in the raf or wont i need much.
Also if i pass this interview and get the 6th form scholarship will i still need to do my raf final interview because in my booklet it says that if you get the scholarship then i’m signed up for the raf as soon as i’m old enough.
I’m 16 and i’m going for pilot
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This form is called “Dorsimbra.” Do you like it?
*****
Time
Upon my watch, three hands tell me the time,
The mirror shows a different degree,
Forgotten thoughts with words that do not rhyme,
Meander down the road to lunacy.
Shine your shoes up!
Put on your tie!
Let’s go outside…
And find a place to fly!
Come and gone for me to see, believed,
The ocean tides, rivers wide, crimson sky,
How will I know when God has called to me?
Upon my watch, three hands tell me the time.
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