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I like it for it’s use of colourful grammar, however it is to subjegated, and a little tiresomet o read, overall though well done.
oh, and, btw, writing about death does not make you “emo”. It just makes you a wise person for letting your feelings pour out. I write tons of dark poetry, but in real life, I am quite a laid back, fun to be with person. Ignore those who have clouded up minds.
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death/Who came a-knocking at my door
Death has visited me to bring me that ribbon
Death’s yielding fingers tie the ribbon around my neck
Ready….set…go…
hauntings …. chronic affliction….fear! Praise the Lord
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oh, and, btw, writing about death does not make you “emo”. It just makes you a wise person for letting your feelings pour out. I write tons of dark poetry, but in real life, I am quite a laid back, fun to be with person. Ignore those who have clouded up minds.
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