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to me that seems to mean that u dont have a solid life to cling to, and u need one, as well as a ryme sceem. their not necessary but they make a poem esier to read
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Wow, I love how you related it to real life. And no, you do not need rhyme. In my opinion, and those of many others, rhyme can be good if it fits the poem and subject and the poet can do it without making it feel forced.
I do have a suggestion, however.
I think that you should separate the little paragraphs into verses and break them up into lines. This will just make it seem more like a poem, if you know what I mean.
Nice work and keep on writing!
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like this one too
Rhymes are not needed —
Fly on the wind, float on the breeze
Ride the flow, its twists and turns
Dart back and forth, whipped by a gust
Long for a gale, a distant landing
All for a sycamore seed seeking rebirth
met many and cockyyyyy.
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