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An excellant peom
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… wow. That was amazing, I love it. I was reading it from a military viewpoint… I don’t know if that’s what you were going for but it definitely works. Reallllly well written, I’m impressed!
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I think this is a very well-written poem, my friend.
For your age, it is excellent!
There are a few things that need to be worked on or tweaked, but all-in-all it is very nice!
You should be proud of your work!
(I write poetry myself & have had some poems published)
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A beautiful poem, very sad, but beautiful all the same. You are very talented indeed…
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Hun, you are absolutely my hero. I love it I love it I love it. Another fabulous poem by the amazing genius man. It’s so bittersweet and melancholic and it reminds me of William Blake’s London but much more passionate and emotional. Keep writing cuz ur amazing! ((((((((((HUGE LIZ HUGS)))))))))
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