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waves a white flag, unconditional surrender…
AARRRGGHHHH…
please, please give me something I can chew on…
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That was excellent TD. Just excellent.
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Showoff!
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I am definitely getting an education in forms of poetry. This is really good, TD. I love the third and fourth lines in particular, though I am still trying to decide the extent to which they are playful… Great work!
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*grumbles* I don’t think I want to play this game anymore.
Simply stunning. I’m going to give them all a try as soon as work and school calms down.
Here’s my submission. Please pardon the sappiness of it, but I’ve just received a beautiful gift and “Shakespearean sonnet” makes me think mushy. *wink*
Good night Sweet Prince of mine, I watch you sleep.
Like an Angel child, your soul is innocent.
At the beauty of your countenance I weep,
The love I have for you will not relent.
The moonlight
glistens on your cheek,
makes me jealous,
of its caress.
I want you more with every passing day,
I love to stroll under the gloaming skies,
I need to lie beside you every night.
Good night Sweet Prince of mine, I watch you sleep.
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