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i think it is good!!
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Do you really think ANYONE is interested enough in your drivel to actually waste their time reading it? By the way… the first thing you need to do is to learn the correct spelling of the word WRITING!!! NO “E” !!!! And also I reported this for not being a question or an answer!!!
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Sorry, man, It’s choppy and your English feels uncoordinated. Leave it for at least a month and maybe you’ll be able at a good distance to see both the forest and the trees. However, I don’t get the impression you were made to be a writer
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My first impression, as a publisher, is wondering whether or not you have even read a book. Your grammar and diction are poor. Your spelling is terrible. There is no clear understanding of pacing. There is zero serious character development. In short, this looks more like a stream of consciousness writing excerise than a legitimate attempt at writing a novel.
My advice to you is get thee to a library. Read some books. Then read some more. When you’ve done that, read again. The best way to become a good writer is to read good writing.
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I couldn’t get past all the errors, spelling, grammatical and all the run-on sentences. While you may have a basic premise of a story, you really need to work on the mechanics of writing. How? By reading prolifically. Read novels you enjoy. Read “How To Write” books. Take a writing class where you can get some feedback. Join a local or online writing critique group. And finally, don’t post your writing at Yahoo Answers. It’s very amateurish thing to do and will only gain you scorn or false praise.
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