I like it very much. The flow of the poem with it’s long stanza, quick stanza, and the long again creates a very interesting and rhythm. I especially like the way it ends as it begins. It gives the poem a definite sense of closure. The poem itself very good too. Is this the same form as Destinations?
Yes, I like it. And you’ve inspired me. I shall attempt my first Dorsimbra. But, I am getting confused with the syllable count. I will have to study it further. Or am I getting hung up on the wrong emphasis?
Your artistry outdoes me, even when you stretch a bit in places. Keep it up and keep posting. How about some new challenges? a couple of us haven’t tried Dorsimbras yet.
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huwaw. i LOVE it.
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I like it very much. The flow of the poem with it’s long stanza, quick stanza, and the long again creates a very interesting and rhythm. I especially like the way it ends as it begins. It gives the poem a definite sense of closure. The poem itself very good too. Is this the same form as Destinations?
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Yes, I like it. And you’ve inspired me. I shall attempt my first Dorsimbra. But, I am getting confused with the syllable count. I will have to study it further. Or am I getting hung up on the wrong emphasis?
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New one on me!
Dorsimbra?
My spell check.
My dictionary.
My Thesaurus.
Don’t have it.
The Y/A spell check flags it as a misspelling.
Clue me in buddy.
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Your artistry outdoes me, even when you stretch a bit in places. Keep it up and keep posting. How about some new challenges? a couple of us haven’t tried Dorsimbras yet.
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