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- Still has tears in eyes –
I’d just change the Tear Drops on My Guitar part, because it’s a song and I dont want you to get sued! BEAUTIFUL!!
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sweet
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she shouls have died reading that, its so sweet and peaceful, how dare she dump u, ur great, keep up the good work. its amazing, the poem is great. ur so good at writing
keep it up. if u dont follow your dreams then theres no piont following anything 
follow them !!!!!
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Well, it’s different. The last line could use some rewording, I don’t know about the light as a flying feather thing. What does that have to do with it? You have some good ideas you just need to put them together a little better. Just my opinion.
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I like it.
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omg …. teardrops on my guitar? ………. you are a star? til the end of never? you like THAT SONG!! no wonder she dumped you, your gay! ….. wait are you a girl..?
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